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You may have remembered all the way back in Blog 113, (stalker much? :P) I wrote about the 15 comedy contests I ran on Facebook. Well now it’s time to write about the latest 15, hopefully in a more neat and tidy manner. (If you check out my old blog, you’ll see it has a large section with no new paragraphs. I don’t want to go into the details, but that was and wasn’t my fault. I could have made amends, but my computer was really testing my patience, so I thought ‘screw it’). Anyway, I’ve posted some pretty funny things in my contests that I never shared on Wiedemann Comedy, so let’s get them published, here! Oh yes, and if you read a comment in brackets, ending with ’SFTF’, that means ‘Simon From The Future’. As in a comment I made just now, that never existed all that time ago. Let’s go! Oh yes, and contests alternate between stand-up based ones, and sketch ones. Let’s go!
Comedy Contest 16 Comments… (And scores).
5th place
Aiden Mungai
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/1839507236091843/
Of course people say bags full of money are bombs. That’s because they want others to leave them alone and they want them for themselves! This video is both funny and a very handy lesson. (In hindsight, I don’t EXACTLY know what that comment means, but I do have a rough idea. If you follow the link and watch the video, I’m sure it would make complete sense - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.5
Charisma: 3.5
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.625
3rd
James Dale
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/231506764250417/
I’ve never seen a comedian ask his audience why his jokes are funny, before. It seems we have an innovator. (At least I understood that - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.5
Overall: 3.6875
3rd
Heath F N Scadden
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/1846596222049611/
You tell lots of white lies? Well, I was thinking of giving you all 5s as a white lie. Just to be consistent. Then I considered it cheating. :( (I actually came across as a bit harsh on that comment. Whoops. Not my intention - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.5
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.6875
2nd
Jonathan Chang (no permission) (‘No permission’? I can’t remember why I wrote that. Maybe because I used his video without his consent? Whoops. Secondly, I really shouldn’t have published that comment. :S - SFTF).
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/1684050861637482/
An interesting point: If a white man drives a fancy car people assume he worked for it. Unless you’re talking about me, in which case people would assume I stole it. No only joking.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.75
1st
Joel Murugiah
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/1904234746341499/
You know what? Jesus IS nifty. I’ve never heard him called that before, but hey, we have another innovator. (I had to modify that comment just now to make it make sense, but I got there in the end - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.5
Charisma: 4
Originality: 4
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.875
Next contest! Will it be any better??…
Comedy Contest 17
7th
Morgan William Comedy
That poor dog must have been confused out of its mind when it was made to point at its owner, whilst the owner told him not too. (Yes, yes, yes, that comment could do with some clarification… - SFTF). Good luck training your dog in the future, because it won’t have a clue what you want it to do. :P
https://www.facebook.com/MorganWilliamComedy/videos/1537940056308592/
Originality: 3.5/5
Acting: 2.5/5
Funniness: 3/5
Production: 2.5/5
Effort: 3/5
Overall: 2.9/5
6th
Natho Ninja Adventures - best ninja warrior comedy page trailer
That laugh at the start… It sounds like it’s from Beavis/Butthead. B and B going ninja? Why not, it works…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qjWrIw7JFWM
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 3.25
Funniness: 3.25
Production: 3.5
Effort: 3.5
Overall: 3.4
5th
Steve 5
Why is this man glued to the wall? That could explain why his material was so out there. I’d go crazy too if I was in such a position long enough…
https://www.facebook.com/Steve5pranks/videos/1125676644255368/
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4
Production: 2.5
Effort: 3.5
Overall: 3.5
3rd
Triple Deadly
Making tea scary and hilarious at the same time. Most people think it’s just a drink!
https://www.facebook.com/tripledeadly/videos/293777817918117/
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 4.05
3rd
Jerrold Benfold
A little on the short side, but short and sweet. Well not SWEET, but you know what I mean.
https://www.facebook.com/jrbenford/videos/1225987834192539/
Originality: 4
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4.75
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 4.05
2nd
Cap Coffin
Yeah, so, I don’t actually know what this video is about. Fortunately for Cap Coffin, making sense isn’t a criteria for my marking system. Can YOU work out what the video means? I challenge you…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqzXVPJYjmU
Originality: 4
Acting: 3.75
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 4.25
Effort: 4.25
Overall: 4.1
1st
Twizzfizz
Ok, this technically got the same score as the crazy Amish sketch, but this one actually made sense, so it takes the lead.
https://www.facebook.com/TheTwizzFizz/videos/2352158958341165/
Originality: 4.25
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.1
Next!…
Contest 18
6th
Ashley Tomlinson
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/592088664589963/
A little on the short side, but I always like hearing about crazy people. You should watch a GG Allin interview. Very interesting. (No, don’t do that - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.5
Charisma: 3.5
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 3
Overall: 3.375
4th
Monica Rosenfeld
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/2130752370318237/
You may think a simple lock is the best investment you’ll ever make, for me I’m very happy with Mac computer. I’ve had it for 10 years and had no problems with it! I can surf the internet, do work, basically do whatever I want. But locks are good too, I guess. It’s the little things, isn’t it?
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.75
4th
David Thomson
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/308616766680233/
A great story teller! The stories you tell are a little weird, maybe, but very funny!
Funniness: 4
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.75
3rd
Mandy Whittles
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/2295124270725248/
Don’t worry, I’m kind of dead inside too. Zombie uprising! (I said that in the heat of the moment. I didn’t actually want that to happen - SFTF). Anyway, a good routine!
Funniness: 4
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.8125
2nd
Warrick Sutton
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/348575842407571/
Like a joke blitz! This man’s a joke machine!
Funniness: 4.25
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.875
1st
Catherine Molloy
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/403652120420678/
Perhaps the most confident and natural comedian (or comedienne) of the month. You were basically assisting an offender, but in this whacky world of comedy, that doesn’t matter.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4.25
Originality: 4
Structure: 4
Overall: 4
Neeeeext!!!!
Contest 19
7th
Steve 5
7th place is still rather amusing, it’s just a great month. Here domestic violence isn’t as funny as some guy getting mugged (read on), but both concepts are entertaining. Wait that didn’t sound good. Fortunately I don’t find either forms of violence funny in real life settings so maybe it doesn’t matter. (As always, clarification is essential).
https://www.facebook.com/Steve5pranks/videos/261045291253623/
Originality: 3.5/5
Acting: 4/5
Funniness: 3.5/5
Production: 2.75/5
Effort: 2.75/5
Overall: 3.3/5
6th
Isaiahj
https://www.facebook.com/IamIsaiahj/videos/250219812579368/
Maybe more of a drama than a comedy, but well acted. The main character did laugh though, so it’s kind of a grey area, I think.
Originality: 3
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 3
Production: 3.25
Effort: 3.5
Overall: 3.4
5th
UTubeSensations Kids
https://www.facebook.com/2079268489006811/videos/254696412151048/
I don’t mean to promote violence again, but why not just slap the librarian? I hate evil librarians. They’re killing the industry.
Originality: 3.25
Acting: 4
Funniness: 3.25
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 3.6
3rd
UTubeSensations
https://www.facebook.com/UTubesensations/videos/578378559306348/
Yes, the video that is funnier than domestic violence. We’re entering above 4 territory, here. Great stuff.
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 3.75
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.05
3rd
Twizzfizz
https://www.facebook.com/TheTwizzFizz/videos/2307620322860435/
What is it with me and liking violence? Here we have a video of some guy getting hit in the face over and over. My high scoring suggests I need therapy. :(
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 3.75
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.05
2nd
Jerrold Benford
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJIa1HZzlaI&feature=youtu.be&fbclid=IwAR0VHumYqmf1GopvB5GspPj_ws-yvfqdV7gqNb2cpNufrWov6FBG82kdqwg
Lots of respect to the actor for keeping a straight face. Surely it must have been hard for him not to laugh even if he did write his own material. There’s nothing wrong with that.
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.1
1st
Matt Jones
https://www.facebook.com/48611331/videos/10102875575665597/
Ohhh, this is a very high scorer. Lots and lots of effort went into the this one, and it kicks bum. Prepare to get blogged about!
Originality: 4.25
Acting: 4.5
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 4.75
Effort: 4.75
Overall: 4.55
For the mathematics fanatics out there, that was five competitions un-obscurified. So here’s a breather in the form of a funny anecdote!… Oh wait, I don’t have one. Next contest, then!
Contest 20
5th
Bryan Mackenzie
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/2037371213221903/
You’re a very normal white guy? Check out Peter, he has a very normal name! You’ll get along great.
Funniness: 3.75/5
Charisma: 3.5/5
Originality: 3.5/5
Structure: 3.75/5
Overall: 3.625/5
4th
Peter Quill AKA Peter Nguyen
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/303027750390978/
A good routine, but it could do with more originality. But look on the bright side, it’s more original than your name! (As hinted at earlier). Watch the video if you don’t know what I’m going on about.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.5
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.6875
4th
Deanna Lydia
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/270019053887975/
A comedienne who is borderline in 3rd place. What a coincidence! ‘What is?’ Again, watch the video.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.5
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.6875
2nd
Sassy Stacey
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/321605628486933/
An epic 12 minuter! Very confident too! Call the police, we have a double threat! (‘Call the police’? That’s ridiculous! Unless you know a policeman personally, and want to show him a funny video in his own private time. Not so ridiculous, then - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.8125
1st
Peter Murphy
https://www.facebook.com/schoolofhardknockknocks/videos/2314991415404053/
In first place we have something a little intense. Especially if you’re autistic and take everything literally.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4
Originality: 3.85
Structure: 3.85
Overall: 3.8625
Wait, I’ve thought of a funny anecdote! No, it’s gone, sorry…
Neeeeeextxtxtxtxtxtxtttt!
Contest 21
6th
Steve 5
Kind of unadventurous camera work, but I’m sure the most attention will go to Steve’s trademark outrageous dialogue. So who cares? (I stopped sharing the videos, here. Was there a reason for that? No. SFTF).
Originality: 3.75/5
Acting: 4/5
Funniness: 3.75/5
Production: 2.75/5
Effort: 2.75/5
Overall: 3.4/5
5th
Ben Kirby
Very funny faces! However, it was a little bit weird the way the soundtrack was so family friendly, yet you swore at a guy on a phone, but it’s certainly a new take on the ‘Mr. Bean’ style of humour.
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 3.75
Funniness: 3.5
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 3.65
4th
Troy Jenkins
Hard to judge the acting on this one as I couldn’t see the actor, just a load of pictures, but very good!
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 3.5
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 3.5
Effort: 3.5
Overall: 3.7
3rd
LIT Laughs
Yet another very funny and original video, even though the jokes were stolen! (The comedian was supposed to use stolen jokes; I should have that pointed out. I kinda made him look like a fraud :S - SFTF). How does that even work? :O
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 4
2nd
Twizzfizz
Ohhh, in a world first, you nearly won for a second time! I don’t know much about physics, but couldn’t the universe end if something like that happened? (I later found out, no. - SFTF). For this month at least, no one will ever know. :S (Again, I know it couldn’t; don’t worry - SFTF).
Originality: 4.25
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.05
1st
Greg Shapiro
Oh my God the European National Anthem that was I guess ‘sung’ at the end was great. Call me immature, but I kind of thought that was funnier than the much deeper political commentary. A very good video all round, other than the fact this kind of satire is quite common.
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 4.25
Effort: 4.25
Overall: 4.15
Here’s the anecdote! It’s not great, but it IS something: When my hair grows longer into a large messy mop, I’m prone to bad hair days. But what can be done? Use a comb? Ha! Been there, done that, it doesn’t work. However, after scraping my hair in all directions to no avail and after a bit of experimentation, I’ve found something that does: Simple water. When things go wrong, just dampen the offending area and it should be sorted out for the rest of the day. Of course, hair gel companies will be furious at me for sharing such a valuable secret, but you can call me the Robin Hood of hair. A real working man’s hero, saving you money. Of course it’s hard to face the fact that wild and free-haired people like you and me have been exploited, so all I can say is ‘move on’.
Nexteroo!
Comedy Contest 22
5th
Cara Adams
Interestingly there is a mix of typical humour and serious sharing of emotions, here. (You’re going to have to take my word for that - SFTF). I want to be a crazy OAP too! Now I don’t feel so alone.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.8125
5th
Tom Picello
Maybe you could walk around the stage instead of wobbling about a bit as it’s a bit more standard. But it’s nice you put energy into your performance.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 4
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.8125
3rd
Joel Smith-Rainey
You’d think someone who openly admits running people over would have been arrested by now. Here we have not only a talented comic, but an all round genius.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 4
Structure: 3.85
Overall: 3.8375
2nd
Paul Canavan
I’ve heard of people shitting bricks, but not a whole brick wall. Stop joking about serious medical conditions and see someone.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 4
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.875
1st
Ange Pange
A confident 10 and a half minute epic! Prepare to receive your special thumbs up!
Funniness: 4
Charisma: 4
Originality: 4
Structure: 4
Overall: 4
Nexteroolio!
Contest 23
5th
Steve 5
Get someone to do some more interesting camera shots! Maybe you could do some badass gangster poses, do some sexy pouts for the female viewers, etc.
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 3.5
Funniness: 3.5
Production: 2
Effort: 3
Overall: 3.1
4th
TwizzFizz
Is this video supposed to be one person talking to herself, or is it supposed to (look to the viewer like it’s - SFTF)… two different people? I assumed it was the latter until the actor said her blanket was more green than blue. Nope, it is blue. This person is clearly crazy. (Yep, I screwed that comment up, making it hard to understand. Let’s try again… You know when… No, wait… You see… No. Ok, right, basically even though there was one actor, she made it look like there was two. But I suggested there was one, talking to herself, making her look schizo. Capiche? - SFTF).
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4
Production: 3.5
Effort: 3.5
Overall: 3.75
3rd
Goatzilla
An 80s metal song with a unique lyrical twist. Just what the music scene needs. You could call it twist and shout music! (Well you could do that. Wouldn’t be cool, though. SFTF).
Originality: 3.75
Acting (Singing): 4
Funniness: 4
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 3.95
2nd
The Uncle Louis Variety Show
To be honest I don’t know what Italian people do and don’t say, but I’ll take your word for it, as you come across as very professional with the flawless accents and all.
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 4.5
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 3.5
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.05
1st
Idaho Boys
Don’t let that bad man take over your farm! Be careful though, anyone who can smell poverty is clearly highly intelligent. Maybe use some Lynx to cover it up, far from expensive. Oh yeah, it’s just a sketch. The acting just pulled me in. :P
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 4.1
Nexterolioliolio…
Contest 24
5th
Shane Lockwood
You shouldn’t really look at your notes when performing, so I had to detract points from… well not charisma… Maybe funniness? Really I should give you extra originality points for doing that, but I decided that’s not fair for the others. Anyway, a strong performance. This competition is extremely close!
Funniness: 3.5/5
Charisma: 3.75/5
Originality: 3.75/5
Structure: 3.5/5
Overall: 3.625/5
4th
Ellen Mahoney
I had to add just a tiny amount of originality points for this performance. (Why? Who knows? - SFTF)
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.8
Structure: 3.5
Overall: 3.7
3rd
Kaley W Chu
Is you laughing a lot a kind of charisma? Well it certainly makes you fun to watch, I guess. What I do know is this is close competition… again. Hard to mark! Perfectly reasonable in all areas.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.85
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.5
Overall: 3.7125
2nd
Geoff Kwitko - give him a link when posted (Whoops, I forgot to delete that comment, too - SFTF).
A ten minute routine with no notes? Pretty impressive. I once forgot my credit card pin code and I use it all the time. You find it difficult being positive you say? Well not any more after reading my motivational comment I’m sure!
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.85
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.8375
1st
Sam Clarke
Excellent charisma points for a cold blooded murderer! If you don’t think that makes sense, check out Sam’s video! (Oh I didn’t post it, AGAIN. You can find it on the School of Hard Knock Knocks Facebook page, though. That’s not so bad, right? - SFTF).
Funniness: 4
Charisma: 4.25
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.5
Overall: 3.875
Nexteeeeeerolio-nexterooo!
Contest 25
5th
Steve 5
Funny lyrics and a pretty soulful voice, too! Not exactly perfect, but that only adds to the character. Again however, the production could have been better…
Originality: 3.75/5
Acting: 4/5
Funniness: 4/5
Production: 2/5
Effort: 3/5
Overall: 3.35/5
4th
TwizzFizz
My only video I’ve ever shared featuring a helicopter, I think. (Though another did use a spaceship). The effort and production is very admirable, here!
Originality: 4
Acting: 4
Funniness: 3.75
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 3.95
3rd
The Uncle Louie Variety Show
Kind of similar to your ‘Things Italians Never Say’, but not in an annoying way. Just in a way that gives you a slightly lower score. :P
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 4.25
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 4
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 4
2nd
Ultra-laid-back news reporting is a funny idea, and this material is very well produced… But is it as funny as slipping on dog poo?…
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 3.75
Funniness: 3.75
Production: 4.5
Effort: 4.5
Overall: 4.05
1st
LIT Laughs
No! LIT Laughs takes the lead by the narrowest of margins! Excellent stuff, here!
Originality: 4
Acting: 4.5
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 4.1
Time for another breather!! I heard on Youtube a couple of songs I really liked, so I had to get the full album off Amazon. Oh my God, a box-set of three releases by the band were selling for under £10! I had to get it. However, when I received it, not only did I find I didn’t like the two albums I never heard, I also realised I didn’t really like the one I listened to on Youtube. That was annoying. I mean the CDs are ALRIGHT, but kind of disappointing. Never mind, after visiting a charity shop, I did manage to find RATM’s debut album in good quality. I’ve had that one for years, but unfortunately the version I had was made of ultra-tacky cardboard, to ‘save the planet’ or whatever. To be honest, I considered it a bit of an embarrassment to my collection, and now it sits in the naughty corner of my room. >:(
Back to business!
Contest 26
5th
Jonathan Hadweh
How dare you say ANYTHING bad about Dominoes. Damn crazy person wasting my time. No only joking. BTW, this contest is SO close.
Funniness: 3.5/5
Charisma: 3.75/5
Originality: 3.75/5
Structure: 3.75/5
Overall: 3.6875/5
4th
Ganesh Vengadasalam
You say you hate people and still get laughs? Not easy to pull off!
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.75
2nd
Samantha Serna
Obviously Australians know what Australians think of Australia. (Hopefully - SFTF) But do they know what Latinos think of the country? They think it’s pretty wacky, as Samantha shows!
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.85
Overall: 3.775
2nd
Alastair Tooth
Again, this is a very close contest, but Alastair’s funny voice gives him the edge.
Funniness: 3.85
Charisma: 3.75
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.775
1st
Chris CZ
Wise and funny at the same time! We have a winner!
Funniness: 3.85
Charisma: 3.85
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.8
Nextxen!
Comedy Contest 27
5th
Steve 5
Big eyes (funny) + Funny dance (also funny) = Amazing. (People often ask what the secret of comedy is, and basically that’s it. Don’t tell anyone, though… - SFTF).
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 2.5
Effort: 2.5
Overall: 3.35/5
3rd
TwizzFizz
How many ways can you say ‘oooooh!’ Turns out, quite a lot. Impressive.
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 4
Funniness: 3.75
Production: 4
Effort: 4
Overall: 3.9
3rd
Reckless Behaviour
Why do you suck at the game? It’s because you’re randomly mashing buttons together! You’re going to give the basketball players an epileptic fit!
Originality: 4
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 3.9
2nd
Skit Bros
What would Steve 5 be like with better production techniques? Maybe something like this…
Originality: 4
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4.25
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 3.95
1st
Bad Medicine
An excellent video about cookies. There’s some subtle humour I didn’t even notice at first. Holding a cookie like a cigarette? Hm! It works! (I was being cheerful in that comment, but deep down I was scared of the world coming to its doom. As explained a while ago, you never really know if making someone a double winner will end everything, do you? Thank the lord, it doesn’t - SFTF).
Originality: 4.25
Acting: 4.5
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 4.25
Effort: 4.5
Overall: 4.4
Nextnextnextneeeeeext!
Comedy Contest 28
3rd
Brad Carrigan
I’m not sure everything you said was funny, some of it was just upsetting, but still pretty good.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.875
3rd
Tim King
Not the king, but pretty close. (Please forgive me for the cheesy joke. You were close, though, that’s the thing).
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.875
3rd
Eddie Duffield
The third person in third. That doesn’t sound right. Catchy, though. Yep he couldn’t quite come second, despite his damn fine pesto anecdotes. Tough month!
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.875
2nd
Jason Clarke
Ohhhh, looking at your notes. I had to detract points for that. But from what? Let’s say ‘structure’. Try harder next time!
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4.25
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.7
Overall: 3.8625
1st
Yvonne Collier
A dilligent and dillightful performer. Choosing you as winner was no dillemma. :D (I can’t remember what that comment means. Something to do with ‘Dill’. You had to watch the video, I guess - SFTF).
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 4.25
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 4
Overall: 3.9375
!!!!!!txeN
Comedy Contest 29
5th
James Russell
A bit slow to get going but the face at 1:18 was absolutely outstanding.
Originality: 3.5
Acting: 3.5
Funniness: 3.5
Production: 3.5
Effort: 3.5
Overall: 3.5
4th
Cash Wallwork
My brother drives a BMW. So does my dad. -_- …. … :P (The video was mocking people with BMWs - SFTF).
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 3.75
Funniness: 3.75
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 3.75
3rd
Steve 5
See what the extra effort does? You get a very respectable third! (Second and first were very good).
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 4
Funniness: 3.75
Production: 3.75
Effort: 3.75
Overall: 3.8
2nd
Twizzfizz
If your other new year’s resolution was to make a video that would come in 2nd place, you’ve achieved your goal! But seek therapy. :P
Originality: 3.75
Acting: 4
Funniness: 4
Production: 3.75
Effort: 4
Overall: 3.9
1st
Bad Medicine
You’ve done it! You’re the only act that has won twice! And the world hasn’t ended! There goes that theory! (Oh my mistake. You know when I was talking about the world ending, earlier? I meant to write that about this video. Could happen to anyone - SFTF).
Originality: 4.25
Acting: 4.5
Funniness: 4.5
Production: 4.25
Effort: 4.5
Overall: 4.4
The final ’Next’!
Contest 30
5th
Natasha Baines
A comedy routine delivered well, but it’s lacking in originality, a little. I hate to say this, but maybe you should be a bit more whacky (as in criminal) like some of the past comedians were.
Funniness: 3.75/5
Charisma: 3.75/5
Originality: 3.5/5
Structure: 3.85/5
Overall: 3.7125/5
5th
Matt Vella
Someone who teases Malta. A Malteaser.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.85
Originality: 3.5
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.7125
3rd
Troy Boy Fisher
Thank God you didn’t win, because if you did and I blogged about you, I’d get demonetised.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.85
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.775
2nd
Krutika Harale keep updated (Forgot to delete the comment again - SFTF).
Super crowd-engaging confidence, here.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.95
Originality: 3.75
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.8
1st
Michael Zoupa
A more interesting delivery, here. But setting houses on fire? No! You still won, though.
Funniness: 3.75
Charisma: 3.95
Originality: 3.95
Structure: 3.75
Overall: 3.85
Ok, you know about who won the contests, but who was the best entry overall? Let’s find out!
15th: Chris CZ, 3.8
14th: Michael Zoupa, 3.85
13th: Peter Murphy, 3.8625
11th: Sam Clarke, 3.875
11th: Joel Murugiah, 3.875
10th: Yvonne Collier, 3.9375
8th: Catherine Molloy, 4
8th: Ange Pange, 4
5th: TwizzFizz, 4.1
5th: Idaho Boys 4.1
5th: LIT Laughs 4.1
4th: Greg Shapiro, 4.15
2nd: Bad Medicine, 4.4
2nd: Bad Medicine 4.4 (Again).
1st: Matt Jones, 4.55
Ok, let’s have a look at the 19th contest winner, here, for old time’s sake…
https://www.facebook.com/48611331/videos/10102875575665597/
However, don’t get too excited, Matt; you didn’t manage to beat all-time record holder Ian Brown and his score of 4.7! Will it ever be beaten? Who knows?? Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!